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Follow Up - To Keep You Informed

  Rewrites are Hell! So much pain! So much brain melting!

  I will use this to keep you informed of Chapter rewrites and Major plot changes. Will delete it after the rehaul.

  Chapters Rewritten -

  **** 11/30/2018 ****

  Ch 1 - Split into two chapters to fix the point of views and the lack of description

  Ch 2 - The second part of Ch 1

  Ch 3 (Was 2) - Fixed up the tenses and made it one Pov

  A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.

  Ch 4 (Was 3) - Fixed a whole lot. So many mistakes it hurt my eyes!

  **** 12/4/2018 *****

  I may need to rewrite ch8-11 (The battle of Venral) since its too long, and a lot of complaints on it. I will make it shorter and more efficient. ---- Its finals this week and next :'( so I am going to release one more chapter before having to stay focused on Uni for a week and a half. BUT there is a silver lining! After next week Monday, I will have 3 weeks with absolutely nothing to take my time up. So, Chapter Galore! and ReWriTe ... *Shudders*

  Never the less, you will get your promised chapter on Saturday! Though rewrites will continue to happen. Let me know what you think of the rewritten chapters!

  Yours Truly,

  Kazi223

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