first things first this poll is only about chapters one through three and the prologue.

  what i want to know is how you experience my text or to be more exact my:

  sentence building and grammar

  does the text sound forced or juvenile.

  do you think i have any writing disabilities from reading my texts

  is the punctuation good

  word choice

  Is the text hard to read or understand

  Is the structure ok paragraphs etc

  how do you like the length of my chapters right now my chapters have been around a thousand

  words each except the prologue should i aim to decrease the amount of chapters in favor of longer ones

  or just continue releasing chapters as is and not bother with the length. since now I am just writing and

  when i get to a point where I am either to tired to continue or just don't have any more ideas for the moment

  and the text looks reasonable I just release it ( after some grunt work of course editing removing unnecessary words

  restructuring sentences and fixing spelling and grammar(which i missed in the prologue thanks again for pointing it out AnalEvaporator)).

  This book is hosted on another platform. Read the official version and support the author's work.

  if you think I am worthy of your time and a bit of feedback feel free to answer these questions

  almost any criticism is appreciated good or bad as long as it is constructive.

  and now for some information about the future

  and since I don't really know if this will spoil it for some people.

  Spoilerthe next few chapters I think Vivo will stay in town so nothing really exciting will happen

  nothing planed for that at-least but the story must somewhat dictate itself imo.

  the reason behind this is because I want some more character development and

  to develop the world around him

  and feel free to point out any spelling mistakes i do so i can correct them.