I will describe any significant changes I make in the revision process of this story here.

  Planned changes:

  > The four chapters in Castle Bosporus will be moved to the Epilogue.

  > Additional conversations expanding upon the relationship between Izanagi and Tantalus will be added.

  > The conversation between Dogwood, Feldrast, and Tantalus will be added.

  > Maria Feldrast will be made into a Colonel to fix any confusion.

  > The descriptions of Feldrast, Svenheim, and Izanagi will be changed.

  > Many of the players' statistics and the rate of progression will be changed.

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  > The title will be changed to Ferrum Online.

  > Many of the uses of brackets will be changed to bold lettering.

  > The titles of the early chapters will be changed to better fit with the current naming convention.

  > Some of the chapters might be added together if I feel that certain chapters are too short.

  > Most of the chapters will be renumbered once I am done with the other changes.

  > I will read through the story and make changes wherever necessary to make it sound better.

  Changes:

  > The title has been changed to Ferrum Online.

  > The cover art has been changed.

  > The chapters describing the events in Castle Bosporus have been moved to the Epilogue.

  > Some character descriptions have been changed.

  > Most uses of brackets have been changed to bold lettering.

  > The System has been significantly overhauled.

  > Maria Feldrast has been made a Colonel.

  > Many chapters have been consolidated.

  > Most chapter titles have been changed.

  > Trismegistus has been replaced with Mozaic in the operation with the S-ranks at the end of Day 2.

  > Izanagi now dies after his battle with the Second Dark Apostle.